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A very visceral depiction of a common experience. It's good so far, looking forward to the full thing!

I have to say, I am incredibly excited to see where this goes from here. The hook was absolutely excellent, and Kylie seems like a more-than-worthy new protagonist. There's a lot of conflict set up in these few pages that I am on the edge of my seat to see how it all plays out. Good job, and good luck.

Thank you so much for the feedback! Im loving writing this book and want to make it as good as I can!